Poetry By Chuck

Subtitle

 

I've been sipping my own bath water.
Slurping its sludge.
Gargling its particulate matter.
And enjoying its taste.

Yes, I've been gobbling it up.
Chugging it down.
Drowning in its wealth.
Living in its waste.

I've drank so much cloudy film.
Chasing drops the tub around.
My stomach is distended.
My tongue coated with paste.

Its a life that really stinks.
Licking the ring around.
Always in a circle.
Wearing an angry sated face.
 

Author notes

With tounge in cheek and a good toothbrush, I offer this piece.  Check your smiles at the door and be prepared to choke on its horrible stench! lol.
Written June 10th, 2004

Comments


  • Jaded Lily silver member
    August 4, 2004
    Hey Chuck!!! maybe we can at least combine your write with touch's idea of mud wrestling and come up with a fun write in this life that sucks!! LOL  MLP...S

  • Touchof1der Moderators member
    July 6, 2004
    A good toothbrush and a bottle of bleach is more like it! Yuck! Gag! Spit!    You are so funny. Your sense of humor as well as your thought provoking way of presenting things are always a delight and a treasure. Thank you again for painting a picture and creating a scene...I'm not sure I totally enjoyed the taste...I'm thinking mud wrestling looks like a lot more fun after this!  Great job!

  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    June 14, 2004
    We all take ourselves to serious sometimes. The true test of character is to ease up on ourselves. Life does suck now and then and sometimes for long times. But, life is life and its like that! lol. Glad you have taken the time to realize ...
    Life Sucks! (grin)


  • kvwriter silver member
    June 14, 2004
    I can absolutely identify! Thank you for putting into words what I could not.--Kel  

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    June 10, 2004
    ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, yuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk , don't send me any kisses 
    Reenie
  • O24376589
    June 10, 2004
    The title caught me, I can imagine a toothbush would be very useful after that, lol, interesting poem too. Awesome.

    always in a circle
    *wearing AN angry sated face* : correction

 

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