Poetry By Chuck

 

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Written March 30th, 2004

Comments

• Your work sounds so familiar. I've seen it or another like it. Either way I liked ikt then and like it now.
  Rose
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  Janice M Pickett
  February 7, 2006
  
  Awwwwww Thats sweet. 
   
  Jan
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  Shancy Fayre
  February 7, 2006
  
  Very nice job. I like all of the ways you came up with to be in her life.  Shancy.
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  Mbrace
  April 2, 2004
  
  Beautiful and very deep..
  Spiritually..I see Jesus speaking to those who dont know Him or understand Him..His breaking heart calling out to the lost ones.
  In the natural.....
  wanting to be everything to the person you love. (Whom ever she is...she's missin out  )
  Watch out Chuck...your gonna have the ladies chasin ya now hehe
  
  Good work my friend
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  lovehateandtears
  April 2, 2004
  
  If only I could be the tears of joy you cry
  
  I love this line!
  This poem, symbolizes me so damn much! I am just the way, I want to be those of some one also!
  Oh I just love it and I applaud you for your great write!
  Good job!
  
  Love
  Kayla Dawn
• emancipation
  April 2, 2004
  
  i really loved this poem--i guess cuz can relate to its essence- i think it was really well written and i don't know what the penguined guy's problem is --i've seen him degrade many good writers here...keep up the great writes
  Edited on Apr 23, 6:00 p.m. because ''.
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  Buried Alive
  April 2, 2004
  
  beautiful poem! i so love it... and i usually don't love that kind of love poems... hope you'll write more poems like this, cause this is great and wonderful
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  wishintreeUK
  March 30, 2004
  
  This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, your heart speaks volumes with the words you have penned here.. you have touched on so many things that make the heart sing, a brilliant poem, well done Chuck, I love this!!! Bravo... ~Katie~
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  cherche -d -ame
  March 30, 2004
  
  Oh my goodness Chuck . This poem is a twin to one of mine that I wrote awhile back " Let me be " Allpoetry.com/Poem144316. Needless to say , I loved this
  Reenie
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  Fool no1
  March 30, 2004
  
  "If only" speaks volumes! Excellent write with real meaning behind the words. Like the way each line begins, and builds to a final statement. Well done .....Mal