Poetry By Chuck

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If only I could be the things that make you smile
If only I could be the laughter in your heart
If only I could be the quickening of your breath
If only I could be your days start
If only I could be the fancy in your eye
If only I could be the tears of joy you cry

If only I could be the sparkle of your personality
If only I could be the one that you desire
If only I could be the beat of your heart
If only I could be the sunshine in your days
If only I could be the sunset of your worries
If only I could be the wind in your hair
If only I could be your best friend
If only I can be your next thought
If only I can be your flowers bud

Then we truly will be in love.

 

 

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Written March 30th, 2004

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PrincessOfFire
February 11, 2006
  • Your work sounds so familiar. I've seen it or another like it. Either way I liked ikt then and like it now.
    Rose

  • Janice M Pickett gold member
    February 7, 2006
    Awwwwww Thats sweet. 
     
    Jan

  • Shancy Fayre
    February 7, 2006
    Very nice job. I like all of the ways you came up with to be in her life.  Shancy.

  • Mbrace
    April 2, 2004
    Beautiful and very deep..
    Spiritually..I see Jesus speaking to those who dont know Him or understand Him..His breaking heart calling out to the lost ones.
    In the natural.....
    wanting to be everything to the person you love. (Whom ever she is...she's missin out  )
    Watch out Chuck...your gonna have the ladies chasin ya now hehe

    Good work my friend

  • lovehateandtears
    April 2, 2004
    If only I could be the tears of joy you cry

    I love this line!
    This poem, symbolizes me so damn much! I am just the way, I want to be those of some one also!
    Oh I just love it and I applaud you for your great write!
    Good job!

    Love
    Kayla Dawn
  • emancipation
    April 2, 2004
    i really loved this poem--i guess cuz can relate to its essence- i think it was really well written and i don't know what the penguined guy's problem is --i've seen him degrade many good writers here...keep up the great writes
    Edited on Apr 23, 6:00 p.m. because ''.

  • Buried Alive
    April 2, 2004
    beautiful poem! i so love it... and i usually don't love that kind of love poems... hope you'll write more poems like this, cause this is great and wonderful

  • wishintreeUK
    March 30, 2004
    This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read, your heart speaks volumes with the words you have penned here.. you have touched on so many things that make the heart sing, a brilliant poem, well done Chuck, I love this!!! Bravo... ~Katie~

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    March 30, 2004
    Oh my goodness Chuck . This poem is a twin to one of mine that I wrote awhile back " Let me be " Allpoetry.com/Poem144316. Needless to say , I loved this
    Reenie

  • Fool no1
    March 30, 2004
    "If only" speaks volumes! Excellent write with real meaning behind the words. Like the way each line begins, and builds to a final statement. Well done .....Mal
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